7 Deadly Copywriting Sins

April 19, 2010 by
Filed under: It's All About Money 


Knowing what not to do helps to give a clearer picture of what to do. Here are seven mistakes you should never make when writing sales copy.

1.  Being slow to get to the point

  • impressions are made in moments
  • mention the main benefit and incentive right out of the gate
  • your opening should be impossible to ignore
  • tell the reader  “what’s in it for me” (WIFM)

2.  Not giving the reader some WIFM at every point

  • use headings, illustrations, videos and captions to communicate prominent benefits wherever the reader’s eye might land
  • repetition is okay just vary the point each time

3. Failing to do a complete selling job

  • give every sensible reason why the reader should respond
  • overcome those objectives
  • omit nothing relevant

4. Failing to prove your statements are true

  • use testimonials
  • when possible use photos of those giving testimonials and their letters in original form — don’t edit them

5. Failing to connect as people

  • show your own picture or pictures of customers
  • people look at and relate to people

6. Failing to cut the fluff

  • every element of your message must contribute to the result
  • don’t distract the reader
  • don’t belabour the details
  • balance between effective repetition and overkill

7. Failing to guide the readers response

  • a strong opening with a weak close leaves the reader feeling more frustrated than motivated
  • make it easy for the reader to respond
  • close persuasively — repeat all the reasons your reader should respond
  • guide the reader to a yes/no choice
  • have more than one call to action

Anything I missed here? Please let me know in the comments.

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7 Deadly Copywriting Sins


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